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alohinun, August 12th, 2011, 8:49 pm

( sorry about the wait again! I'm going to do my best to get the rest of the pages done for this chapter today, tomorrow and Sunday. :) Then I have to get ready for the semester at university starting up again! Ffff- so busy.)

@Cannetella: Aahahaha! I doubt his ego can get any bigger already from compliments, honestly. x'D he'd much rather chew people out, apparently!

@mangufurutani: asd;jdsl thank youu! ;A;

@blankd: ..wow, you're right! (this is why I should not allow myself to color things past midnight) I'll fix that up as soon as possible! :) Thanks for letting me know. Your crits are really helpful!

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blankd, August 13th, 2011, 12:22 am

Glad I can help!

Shouldn't it be "I have/had given you good crops [...]"? I'm not sure about his speaking style yet so 8S

(And don't be afraid of using different sized text for indicating emotion, his current "normal" but angry voice is fine here so don't worry. 8) )

mangofurutani, August 13th, 2011, 2:41 am

Ooooh suspense! I'm excited for the next page! <3

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