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alohinun, September 7th, 2011, 10:27 pm

Go go go!
Still bogged down with classes! Still incredibly busy!
Still working as fast as I can! I'm actually really excited about all of this.

General Jingwei!? General!

@mangofurutani: This chapter and the next has quite a few new characters! c: I'm glad you like it so farrrr.

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Cannetella, September 7th, 2011, 10:44 pm

He has a heron harem.

And with them at his side he will rule the world.

Luperus, September 8th, 2011, 1:49 am

There appears to be a stalker crane in the fog waiting to pounce 8O!! watch out guys!! XD

blankd, September 8th, 2011, 6:08 am

Interesting development. The color difference between the assistants (?) and the General are quite nice.

Front shots are a bit hard but the feet on the male assistant look a bit "flat", a line indicating where his ankle and foot meet could help create depth as would some creases on the sash around his waist.

*on the last page, you might want to be careful about how you shade under her hair, it's a bit dark and creates the illusion of greater distance than you probably intend.

EDIT: And oof, your classes, hope you find some time to relax!

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